Part 1: Rewrite your ending
I am in no way in the position to determine whether hyperdensity is a good or bad thing for society, however, in my eyes, I think that with a little bit of work, it can lead to a lot of good. Having all those environmental benefits will intrigue a lot of people as our environment and its future is a hot topic nowadays. If we are able to implement certain aspects, such as having an easier access to establishments that help with mental health problems for example, could make it so that these communities will have a lot more positives than negatives. Promoting the positive and reducing the negative is what I like to call, killing two birds with one stone.
Part 2: Rethink your structure
- Why does Griffintown have so many condo buildings?
- Description of Griffintown
- People are unhappy about hyperdensity in Griffintown
- Mental and economic disadvantages of hyperdensity
- Economic and environmental benefit of hyperdensity
- Killing 2 birds with 1 stone
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